Tuesday, 10 March 2015

THE BUILDING

The building lay deserted and still except for the groans of the brick walls, that echoed throughout the whole valley.

A lazy stream of wind weaved in and out between the rickety windows and then with a sigh of satisfaction it would leave them behind with a cold draft settling within the glaring walls.

In the corner stood a heavily ragged chair barely standing on it's own four legs, beside it stood a solid oak table thickly spread with a heavy layer of dust, reminding the room of it's terrifying memory's...

MY GOAL:

I want to structure my paragraphs in relation to each other.
I showed this by having a introduction which clearly introduces the topic, and I leave the story with the reader hanging

1 comment:

  1. Wow what a beautiful way you have with words Yneke, a great example of level 4 writing.

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